Do you like this other "poem"?

it's about my oppressive and crass boss, whose name is pete chaisson. I know it's not a poem in the classical sense, but what do you think anyway. Thanks.



Le Pierre Chaisson



What kind of agent,

Speaks so cheaply,

Of his date?

Who is that,

Rummaging around,

For uneaten ribs,

Of pale celery?

Standing in the shadow,

Of a listless old willow tree,

Grand family tree,

Roots in Italy

Cow moos, “MOO”

But you can’t see-

Your chocolate eyes

Are thoroughly salted

And you can’t hear-

Your ears are packed,

With morning glories

Look ahead!

Through a well lit chasm

Semen in the waterfall

Do not bow your head

Post-masquerade

Do not reveal

Your cancerous old frame

Limp away instead

To the birthplace of your father

Faceless old,

Ignorant man

He vacationed in the sand,

Racist telepathy

Documents and analyzes

With a tan

Do you like this other "poem"?
I don't dare to evaluate ya poem but i like it . It made me feel kinda better in these my boring days . By the way , are you French , if so ... Bonjour , ok !
Reply:very nice poem, well done!
Reply:Boy oh boy! You sure dislike this guy! Very good poem - good imagery. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it.
Reply:Very intresting.
Reply:Not hard to read.
Reply:wow, it's terrible

but I like it
Reply:lol... u sure do hate him...
Reply:It's rather amusing.

I liked it anyway.



:D
Reply:Mmmmmmmmm, very deep.
Reply:hahaha it's cool you express you anger and hate like this, quite artistic and non-harming

Congratulations!
Reply:yea it's interesting!