Please what do you think of this poem?

be honest please thanks a lot





Reasons for life





Sometimes we need some reasons

To relish the coming seasons

To keep breathing smiling and hoping

To continue expecting a happy ending

Sometimes we scream out for motivation

To get through a harsh situation

A powerful feeling that push us every morning to wake up

To try one million times and never give up

Give us a reason to live

Something real and positive

Give me a reason to stay

That’s what I pray for everyday

Give them a reason to smile

Do it! It’s worth while

Because one day you’ll need reasons too

That day you’ll be waiting for rescue

You’ll try to act on the big stage of life

Hidden by a mask, between your mind and soul will be strife

Either to bury your misery

And show to people a fake glory

Or accept your destiny

And be optimistic so you’ll live in harmony

Pretend to be or just be?

This will be your Hamlet’s question maybe.

Please what do you think of this poem?
this is a beautiful, honest poem. i luv it! send it to a publisher.
Reply:-"Perfect"!!!
Reply:Beautiful! I give it an 8.5 :)