Reasons for life
Sometimes we need some reasons
To relish the coming seasons
To keep breathing smiling and hoping
To continue expecting a happy ending
Sometimes we scream out for motivation
To get through a harsh situation
A powerful feeling that push us every morning to wake up
To try one million times and never give up
Give us a reason to live
Something real and positive
Give me a reason to stay
That’s what I pray for everyday
Give them a reason to smile
Do it! It’s worth while
Because one day you’ll need reasons too
That day you’ll be waiting for rescue
You’ll try to act on the big stage of life
Hidden by a mask, between your mind and soul will be strife
Either to bury your misery
And show to people a fake glory
Or accept your destiny
And be optimistic so you’ll live in harmony
Pretend to be or just be?
This will be your Hamlet’s question maybe.
thanks a lot
What do you think of this poem please?? be sincere?
Somebody once told me that one way to measure a poem's success is by reading the lines in reverse order (bottom to top). Your's tells the same story both ways. Very nice. TD
Reply:I liked this poem
The title is even perfect
to describe each situation.
however there are some lines that
is true.
Sometimes we need some reasons
to relish some of the seasons.
Give us a reason to live
Something real and positive.
give them a reason to smile
do it its worth while
Because one day you'll need reasons too
That day you will need a rescue.
I enjoyed how the words were put together in this poem
Reply:I think this poem is a song of a lost soul. Whose hanging on a thread. This poem describes how hurt she is and cant see the possibility of living with the pain. She is in the middle of no where. to her life is no purpose. I pity the one who made this poem. For it does not generate or help broken heart
Reply:Good poem too... I like the first 4 lines of it. It reminds me of The hardworking people who makes our world go around.
Keep on rocki'n!
:-)
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