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"MORNING DANCE"



The sun is yet to come



So is my love



But the song of a bird foresees the coming glory.



I dance in this blue dawn,

rejoicing over a new day.



The memory of today will be love again

cuz I know ,



You will be with me forever.

Ask comments on this poem I wrote before?
Simple and romantic. Good job!!! Good use of metaphors, no rhymes but is good, poetry is not always about rhyming, is about expressions. Keep writing.
Reply:That is very nice indeed, you wake up see the sun and the begining of a new day and how the day will end and the person that will be with you for ever! VERY NICE!
Reply:Good =]



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Reply:I like the way you write. Flows nicely.
Reply:Nice .

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