A poem up for critque?

Does my heart not sing in these words?

Do I not fill the page with bells?

Can not the singing of my heart be brought upon the screen?

Golden poetry,

glisten the light of dawn!

Touch the crytal drops of dew,

that lie upon the mornings grass!

Soar the night's ebony sky,

roam the earths ancient oceans!

Bring forth the light of the morning and let it be seen!

Let the glory of the earth echo!

FOREVER LET IT ECHO!

Alas,

a strange fate awaits thee who see no reason in my words,

a death,

flooded by the tears,

of a weeping earth.

A poem up for critque?
That was a really great poems. It seems u really put your heart in it. And when u do that u give a lot of feeling and it makes the reader want to know more. That was really nice keep writing
Reply:I see talent here! Lots of it!
Reply:At the heart of this confusing melange of unfocused verse is a brilliant line...



"Fill the page with bells."



Forget poetry. You should write titles.